That was really excellent! But also very painful and heartbreaking. Poor Martin, trying so hard to help and taking such treatment without complaint.
One of the lines that stuck with me was "His job must have not been good enough because Tim stalks up behind him and yanks the fabric down aggressively until it's around his knees." Even in this situation, Martin seems to worry about something like that. Basically, I love the characterisation here. And Tim's just so full of anger.
Re: Tim/Martin, angry sex
One of the lines that stuck with me was "His job must have not been good enough because Tim stalks up behind him and yanks the fabric down aggressively until it's around his knees." Even in this situation, Martin seems to worry about something like that. Basically, I love the characterisation here. And Tim's just so full of anger.