Ohhhh have I mentioned that I really like the way you use Beholding horror because I REALLY like the way you use Beholding horror. This gets the side of it that’s the fear of your vulnerable/private moments being perceived and judged by an unseen audience so well and intimately and the line about Magnus being there too made me physically recoil. Poor Martin! Also I cannot think of a single happy outcome of Martin going to the Panopticon—(is he going to give himself to Jonah? Give himself to the Eye directly? Oh no I don’t like this)—and I absolutely cannot wait for whatever fresh angst the next chapter brings. Also, little detail but the bioluminescent eye flowers were such a cool image and I’ve been doodling them on my schoolwork all day. (PS Sorry for messing up the comments order with my last ones 😅(this is pensive))
Re: Apple of Your Eye 11/???
Also I cannot think of a single happy outcome of Martin going to the Panopticon—(is he going to give himself to Jonah? Give himself to the Eye directly? Oh no I don’t like this)—and I absolutely cannot wait for whatever fresh angst the next chapter brings.
Also, little detail but the bioluminescent eye flowers were such a cool image and I’ve been doodling them on my schoolwork all day.
(PS Sorry for messing up the comments order with my last ones 😅(this is pensive))